diff --git a/src/simplewallet/simplewallet.cpp b/src/simplewallet/simplewallet.cpp index dcd3179f8..4484aa84e 100644 --- a/src/simplewallet/simplewallet.cpp +++ b/src/simplewallet/simplewallet.cpp @@ -2154,8 +2154,8 @@ bool simple_wallet::welcome(const std::vector &args) message_writer() << tr("Welcome to Monero, the private cryptocurrency."); message_writer() << ""; message_writer() << tr("Monero, like Bitcoin, is a cryptocurrency. That is, it is digital money."); - message_writer() << tr("Unlike Bitcoin, your Monero transactions and balance stay private, and not visible to the world by default."); - message_writer() << tr("However, you have the option of making those available to select parties, if you choose to."); + message_writer() << tr("Unlike Bitcoin, your Monero transactions and balance stay private and are not visible to the world by default."); + message_writer() << tr("However, you have the option of making those available to select parties if you choose to."); message_writer() << ""; message_writer() << tr("Monero protects your privacy on the blockchain, and while Monero strives to improve all the time,"); message_writer() << tr("no privacy technology can be 100% perfect, Monero included."); @@ -2163,7 +2163,7 @@ bool simple_wallet::welcome(const std::vector &args) message_writer() << tr("Flaws in Monero may be discovered in the future, and attacks may be developed to peek under some"); message_writer() << tr("of the layers of privacy Monero provides. Be safe and practice defense in depth."); message_writer() << ""; - message_writer() << tr("Welcome to Monero and financial privacy. For more information, see https://getmonero.org/"); + message_writer() << tr("Welcome to Monero and financial privacy. For more information see https://GetMonero.org"); return true; }