diff --git a/1.3/Defs/Drugs/Pills_Menstruation.xml b/1.3/Defs/Drugs/Pills_Menstruation.xml index 8325b19..9f65c17 100644 --- a/1.3/Defs/Drugs/Pills_Menstruation.xml +++ b/1.3/Defs/Drugs/Pills_Menstruation.xml @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ OvaryRegenerationPill - Recovers an ovary's health, restoring some quantity of eggs. Less effective on ovaries with few eggs remaining. Cannot recover menopause. + Recovers the ovaries' health, restoring some quantity of eggs. Less effective on ovaries with few eggs remaining. Cannot recover menopause. Things/Item/ORPill Graphic_StackCount @@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ Cyclosporine - An immunosuppressant. Can cure antisperm antibody, but harms the body's ability to fight off infection and disease for 24 hours. + An immunosuppressant. Can cure antisperm antibody, but reduces the body's ability to fight off infection and disease for 24 hours. Things/Item/Cyclosporine Graphic_StackCount diff --git a/1.3/Defs/HediffDef/Hediffs_Menstruation.xml b/1.3/Defs/HediffDef/Hediffs_Menstruation.xml index 330e2a1..3049d2f 100644 --- a/1.3/Defs/HediffDef/Hediffs_Menstruation.xml +++ b/1.3/Defs/HediffDef/Hediffs_Menstruation.xml @@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ Hediff_Menopause menopause - A condition caused by exhaustion of the ovaries' eggs. Without eggs, the womb can no longer produce children. + A condition caused by exhaustion of the ovaries' eggs. The womb can no longer produce children. {0} has entered menopause (0.70,0.70,0.00) false @@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ Hediff_Climacteric climacteric - Ovulation has become irregular as the ovaries reach exhaustion. Menopause will soon occur. + Ovulation has become irregular as the ovaries approach exhaustion. Menopause will soon occur. (0.70,0.70,0.00) false false @@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ Hediff_Estrus estrus - A condition caused by a womb entering its most fertile phase of the menstrual cycle. Sexual arousal and desire increase dramatically as the body yearns to become pregnant. Increased chance of vaginal sex occurring and potentially lower standards in mate selection. + A condition caused by a womb entering the most fertile phase of its menstrual cycle. Sexual arousal and desire increase dramatically as the body yearns to become pregnant. Increased chance of vaginal sex occurring and potentially lower standards in mate selection. (1.00,0.60,0.75) false false